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To: Jeffrey Epstein[jeevacation©gmail.com] From: Eric Roth Sent: Fri 10/23/2009 1:19:45 PM Subject: RE: Max's Essay for your review imade001.ind inset/0_3S This is all new to me as my children are only 11 & 13. I read through the Essay prior to sending it to you and I agree with you. What specifically do most colleges look for with regard to "content- ( after your e-mail I understand that the Essay should provoke great interest to the reader)? Perhaps I need to understand the "purpose" of "The Essay"? Sincerely, Eric Roth President International Jet Interiors 2221 Smithtown Avenue Long Island MacArthur Airport Ronkonkoma, NY 11779 EFTA_R1_01512571 EFTA02438983 From: Jeffrey Epstein [mailto:jeevacation©gmail.com] Sent: Friday, October 23, 2009 9:09 AM To: Eric Roth Subject: Re: Max's Essay for your review not good at all: not well organized,,, limited vocab, read it„ do you find it interesting„ imagine the guy/girl reading it after reading 200 others„ he will put it down without going through it. On Fri, Oct 23, 2009 at 8:46 AM, Eric Roth wrotc: Dear Jeffrey, Attached is Max's essay as requested. Please let me know your thoughts. Thank you. Sincerely. Eric Roth President EFTA_R1_01512572 EFTA02438984 International Jet Interiors 2221 Smithtown Avenue Long Island MacArthur Airport Ronkonkoma. NY 11779 www.intljet.com website ***Mtn ****************************** ******************** The information contained in this communication is confidential, may be attorney-client privileged, may constitute inside information, and is intended only for the use of the addressee. It is the property of Jeffrey Epstein Unauthorized use, disclosure or copying of this communication or any part thereof is strictly prohibited and may be unlawful. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately by return e-mail or by e-mail to [email protected], and destroy this communication and all copies thereof, including all attachments. EFTA_R1_01512573 EFTA02438985