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From: Lesley Groff Sent: Thursday, May 31, 2012 1:36 PM To: Jeffrey Epstein CC Subject: Fwd: 1st write-up Attachments: Martin Nowak summary.docx; Untitled attachment 00129.htm Begin forwarded message: From: Lindsay Borthwick Date: May 31, 2012 9:33:58 AM EDT To: Lesley Groff Subject: 1st =rite-up Hi Lesley, Please find =ttached a write-up for Jeffrey. Also, I want to pass along the note =elow. Many thanks! Lindsay Hi Jeffrey, I =ope this write-up is to your liking. It's about Martin's work. I =sually have a strong sense of format when I start writing a piece =ecause I know where it's going to be published and therefore how it's =oing to be read. But because you and I haven't really decided on that, = just tried to capture the spirit of the day, Martin's intellectual =assions and the science itself. This piece focuses on his work on =usociality in ants and prelife. (I could easily write a short follow-up =iece on his cancer work with Bert Vogelstein, particularly once their =orthcoming paper is published in Nature.) All this to say that ='m not married to this format. What I've written is long and fairly =agazine-y in style. I think it will capture an audience's interest and =oes justice to Martin's work (and your support of it), but in the =uture I could also boil the presentations down to just the science and =eep them short — closer in length to, say, a blog post. In fact, that =ay be the best strategy for some of the presentations from April 15, =ince Martin's and Ted Kaptchuk's contained a lot more narrative than =ost of the others. Lastly, I usually check the facts of a =rite-up like this with the scientists I'm writing about, but I haven't =one that yet. So if you find some of the scientific details a bit =uzzy, that's why. Ordinarily, they would be clarified or corrected =efore publication. Just part of the process. I'm leaving today =or Toronto, where I'll be on holiday for the next two weeks. I can =rite up another couple of presentations while I'm there, if you'd like. =ut first, I'd welcome your feedback on this one. EFTA_R1_02060547 EFTA02699032 Revisiting =hat day's conversations and Martin's work, in particular, was a =leasure. Thanks for the =pportunity. Best, Lindsay 2 EFTA_R1_02060548 EFTA02699033